College Application
Personal Essay Review

$99

Looking for an extra set of eyes on your common app and/or supplemental essay? billy will review your essay, provide line-by-line and developmental feedback, and editorial suggestions to prepare your best college application personal essay.

What You'll Get

Thorough review of your common app or supplemental essay

Detailed feedback and suggestions, including edits on structure, content, and style

A quality essay that meets the standards expected by college admissions readers

How it Works

Step 1: Upload your essay through the form on this page.

Step 2: Pay $99 through the PayPal link on the confirmation page.  

Step 3: After billy reviews your essay, you will receive an email with feedback, edits, and suggestions.

STEP 1

Upload Your Essay

Upload your essay for billy to review it, provide line-by-line and developmental feedback, and editorial suggestions.

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Bio

Billy Lombardo has taught English literature and creative writing at the Latin School of Chicago, Wendell Phillips Academy, Roosevelt University, Benedictine University, UCLA Extension, Laurel Springs School, and Global Online Academy. He has coached hundreds of students, from Chicago to Shanghai, through the college application personal essay process. Billy is the author of The C.A.P.E. Crusade: Your Guide to a Great College Application Personal Essay, Morning Will Come, The Logic of a Rose: Chicago Stories, The Man with Two Arms, and Meanwhile, Roxy Mourns.

Billy is the founder of Writing Pros/e, a writing, editing, and coaching business. He is the founder of Polyphony Lit, a student-run, international literary magazine for high school writers and editors. He lives in Chicago’s Albany Park neighborhood and teaches at Trinity High School in River Forest, IL.